Saturday, November 23, 2024

Basketball - Recommendations

Spoiler alert...

The self-made person doesn't exist. Well-known people get help up the ladder. Sometimes it's a boost, for others it's providing the ladder itself. 

Letters of recommendation afford players another scaffold in careers under construction. 

What belongs in a recommendation? Consider a template:

1) Purpose - writing in support of ______ applying for ________

2) Introduction - brief background about the author 

3) Observation - interactions with the subject (include character and competence)

4) Accomplishments - support for recommendation

5) Peak performance (description of highlight performance)

6) Comparison - whom is she like? Comparison with a well-known achiever can help others see them more favorably 

7) Closing - people remember peaks and ends (be memorable)

A digression to ChatGPT: 

[Your Name]
[Your Title or Position]
[Your School/Organization Name]
[Your Address]
[City, State ZIP Code]
[Email Address]
[Phone Number]

[Date]

Admissions Committee
[College/University Name]
[Address]
[City, State ZIP Code]

Dear Admissions Committee,

It is my pleasure to write this letter of recommendation for [Student’s Full Name], who has been a remarkable member of [Your School/Organization] for the past [timeframe]. As [Your Position, e.g., a teacher, advisor, or coach], I have had the privilege of working closely with [Student’s First Name] and witnessing their impressive growth, academic excellence, and exceptional character.

[Student’s First Name] is a [describe qualities such as hardworking, curious, or ambitious] individual who consistently strives for excellence in all they undertake. In my [subject or capacity, e.g., AP Physics or mentoring role], [Student’s First Name] not only demonstrated mastery of the material but also brought an eagerness to explore beyond the curriculum. Their ability to ask thoughtful questions and make connections across disciplines sets them apart as a student who truly loves learning.

Beyond the classroom, [Student’s First Name] is an active contributor to our school community. As [specific roles, e.g., captain of the volleyball team or lead organizer of a school fundraiser], they exemplify leadership, teamwork, and resilience. One memorable example of their dedication occurred during [specific example, e.g., organizing a charity event or stepping up during a critical team moment]. Their ability to inspire peers and remain calm under pressure is a testament to their maturity and leadership.

Equally notable is [Student’s First Name]’s commitment to making a positive impact outside of school. Through [describe extracurricular or community service activities], they have shown a profound sense of responsibility and compassion. Whether [specific activity or achievement, e.g., mentoring younger students or volunteering at a local food bank], they approach every task with sincerity and a desire to make a difference.

I have no doubt that [Student’s First Name] will bring the same energy, intellect, and determination to your institution as they have to our school. They have the skills, work ethic, and character to thrive in a rigorous academic environment and contribute meaningfully to your campus community. I wholeheartedly recommend [Student’s First Name] for admission to [College/University Name].

Please feel free to contact me at [email address] or [phone number] if you require further information.

Sincerely,
[Your Full Name]
[Your Position]

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